Wednesday 20 November 2013

Imagery quickwrite

Concept Art Writing Prompt: The Creature Waiting at the Bus Stop

http://io9.com/concept-art-writing-prompt-the-creature-waiting-at-the-769946202

I was standing at the bus stop. All I saw was this things torpedo shaped head, also very dark and mysterious looking. Its eyes were black like the clear night sky. Its body was like an odd looking silhouette, could only be described as like a slender type looking thing. Tall, dark, scary, intimidating. The thing was breathing like it couldnt catch his breath, very deep, with a slight growl, sounded almost like its body was quivering because i could hear the shakiness in its constant breaths. The creature, also had a very specific stench. I could smell rotting food, but it wasnt food. I couldnt figure out what it is. Almost like a rotting animal. It was a very strong smell, enough to move a couple steps away because i would of thrown up. The smell was like a wall of a bunch of old people in one room in the hospital that havent showered, just a dirty, gross smell. Not pleasent. If i could, i wanted to feel its face. Touch the roughness of its cheecks. It's face resembled sandpaper, but even more rough than that. I will never know about this thing. After we got on the bus, he got off a couple stops later. Ill never see it again.

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